Study night

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I think I commented on another piece with Talitha a while ago, I always love seeing other people's OCs in different pictures - it feels like watching them come to life. By the way, I like the designs a lot. Their clothes look lovely and colorful. The pattern on Dari's shirt is especially pretty.

I also really like the mood in this one, it captures study nights perfectly with Talitha fallen asleep over her notes and Dari in deep concentration over his work. I feel like the only thing missing is some empty cups of coffee/tea and some snack foods. (Though some students are more tidy, of course.)

The room looks nice, I like the furniture like the couch, even the table and especially the lamp. I also like the wallpaper, although I think it steals too much attention from the rest of the picture. reducing the contrast inside the pattern would help. You might also try to make the far background a bit blurred, which has the additional effect of creating depth. Furthermore, I feel like the ground is a bit plain in comparison, I think some sort of texture or even just additional lines here and there might be a good addition.

I think you did a good job with poses and anatomy in general - Talitha in particular looks very nice in this regard. Only her left arm appears to be abit stiff, but this might be because I can't see the edge of the couch very well. With Dari I spot two issues. First, his left thumb looks a bit too big compared to his fingers. Second, his right upper arm seems too long and as a result, his arm looks like it's bent in avery uncomfortable way. Other than that I don't spot anything.

Hope this was of some help.